審題
仔細(xì)閱讀寫(xiě)作題目后，我們知道，題目是個(gè)帶條件狀語(yǔ)從句的疑問(wèn)句，引導(dǎo)我們對(duì)主題（electric power）進(jìn)行深入的思考，讓我們假設(shè)在沒(méi)有的電的情況下會(huì)發(fā)生什么。雖然提綱給出段首部分，但除第一段是給出段首句外，第二段給的是一個(gè)虛擬的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，第三段僅給了一個(gè)承上啟下、表示因果關(guān)系的副詞。仔細(xì)分析所給的提綱后，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)這三個(gè)段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系：第一段從正面闡述“電是現(xiàn)代生活中一個(gè)重要部分”，第二段從反面證明電的重要性，第三段則總結(jié)前面的論述。
編列提綱
分析提綱后，我們知道，第一段中給出的段首句同時(shí)也是主題句。該段的主題是electricity，支配思想是an essential part of our modern life，即：
Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life.
Topic Controlling idea采集者退散
因此，第一段必須圍繞“電”這一主題展開(kāi)，必須用與現(xiàn)代生活相關(guān)的事例來(lái)證明“電已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活中的一個(gè)重要部分”。因此，我們可以用舉例法展開(kāi)這個(gè)段落。我們知道，電與現(xiàn)代生活是息息相關(guān)的。比如，我們晚上用電燈照明，看電視、聽(tīng)廣播離不開(kāi)電，像空調(diào)、電冰箱、微波爐等許多家用電器都離不開(kāi)電�？梢哉f(shuō)，現(xiàn)代生活已離不開(kāi)電。
第二段只給我們一個(gè)虛擬的條件狀語(yǔ)從句（注意主句也要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣），要求我們闡述在假設(shè)的條件（如果沒(méi)有電）成立下可能產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果。因此，我們可采用因果關(guān)系法（中的結(jié)果分析型）發(fā)展這一段落。那么，我們?cè)O(shè)想一下，如果沒(méi)有電，會(huì)產(chǎn)生什么結(jié)果呢？不用說(shuō)，如果沒(méi)有電，世界肯定會(huì)大亂，也會(huì)給人們的生活帶來(lái)諸多不便。比如，工廠無(wú)法產(chǎn)生產(chǎn)品，許多現(xiàn)代化的通訊設(shè)施也無(wú)法使用，學(xué)生無(wú)法正常上學(xué)，商店、銀行、郵局也無(wú)法提供服務(wù)。
第三段給出Therefore一詞，提醒我們應(yīng)對(duì)前面的論述進(jìn)行總結(jié)。我們可采用“建議與結(jié)論”相結(jié)合的結(jié)尾方法展開(kāi)結(jié)尾段。我們可先總結(jié)前面的論述，讓人們認(rèn)識(shí)到電的重要性，必須確保穩(wěn)定、充足的電力供應(yīng)。但怎樣才能做到這一點(diǎn)呢？一方面，我們要呼吁人們養(yǎng)成節(jié)約用電的習(xí)慣；另一方面，我們又要多建電站和尋找其他可轉(zhuǎn)化為電的能源，以滿足不斷增長(zhǎng)的用電需求。經(jīng)過(guò)一番思索，我們可以列出下列提綱：
Topic: ElectricityQuestion: What would happen if there were no power?
Outline:I. Electricity has become an essential part of our modern life.1. Essential for electricity lamps2. Essential for TV or radio3. Essential for many other household applianceII. If no power, our world would be in a state of confusion.1. No essential industrial products2. Life – seriously affecteda. No modern communicationb. No running waterc. No services III. Electricity has become an essential part of our modern life and we should guarantee a steady supply of power.1. Save electric power2. Build more power stations3. Find other energy resourcesIntroductionBody Conclusion
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⑴Ever since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ⑵The most obvious example is that electricity lamps give us light at night. ⑶Besides, electricity is needed when we watch TV or listen to the radio. ⑷Electricity is also essential for many household appliances such as air-conditioners, refrigerators and microwave stoves. ⑸In a word, there is hardly anything in our modern life that has nothing to do with electric power.（第一段的第一句是主題句，指出“自上個(gè)世紀(jì)初以來(lái)，電已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活中重要的一部分”。接著用舉例法發(fā)展這一段落，舉出三個(gè)例子充分論證作者的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)尾句重申了電的重要性，指出現(xiàn)代生活中幾乎沒(méi)有什么東西與電是毫不相關(guān)的。） ⑹If there were no power, our world would be in a state of confusion. ⑺For one thing, machines in factories would stop running and we would have to go without many essential industrial products. ⑻For another, our life would be seriously affected. ⑼For example, all the modern communications were shut up, running water would stop, and all the banks, schools, hospitals and post offices were closed. ⑽Without power, the result would be terrible.（第二段的第一句也是主題句，指出“如果沒(méi)有電，世界將一片混亂”。接著用列舉法闡述沒(méi)有電所帶來(lái)的兩個(gè)結(jié)果，并舉例說(shuō)明因此給我們的生活帶來(lái)的諸多不便。結(jié)尾句重申了沒(méi)有電可能產(chǎn)生的后果的嚴(yán)重性。⑾Therefore, people should realize the importance of electricity and do everything to guarantee a steady supply of power. ⑿On the one hand, we should cultivate a sense of saving electric power. ⒀On the other hand, more power stations should be built and other energy resources must be found so as to provide sufficient power for the increasing demand. （第三段第一句對(duì)前面的論述進(jìn)行了總結(jié)：人們應(yīng)當(dāng)認(rèn)識(shí)到電的重要性，并采取一切措施保證穩(wěn)定的電力供應(yīng)。作者還建議人們應(yīng)采取行動(dòng)，確保不會(huì)發(fā)生沒(méi)有電的情況。為了滿足日益增長(zhǎng)的用電的需要，作者建議我們一方面要養(yǎng)成節(jié)約用力的習(xí)慣；另一方面我們應(yīng)多建電站，尋找其他的能源。⑴主題句⑵例一⑶例二⑷例三⑸結(jié)尾句⑹主題句⑺結(jié)果一⑻結(jié)果二⑼舉例說(shuō)明結(jié)果二⑽結(jié)尾句⑾總結(jié)全文⑿建議一⒀建議二
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�、臙ver since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ⑵The most obvious example is that electricity lamps give us light at night. ⑶Besides, electricity is needed when we watch TV or listen to the radio. ⑷Electricity is also essential for many household appliances such as air-conditioners, refrigerators and microwave stoves. ⑸In a word, there is hardly anything in our modern life that has nothing to do with electric power.
�。ǖ谝欢沃杏行┰~用得很恰當(dāng)，如essential(必不可少的；最重要的), obvious(明顯的)。有些短語(yǔ)也用得不錯(cuò)，如be essential for(對(duì)……是必不可少的), such as(例如), in a word(換句話說(shuō)), have nothing to do with … (與……毫無(wú)關(guān)系)等。另外，表語(yǔ)從句The most obvious example is that … 也用得很恰當(dāng)。）
�、蔍f there were no power, our world would be in a state of confusion. ⑺For one thing, machines in factories would stop running and we would have to go without many essential industrial products. ⑻For another, our life would be seriously affected. ⑼For example, all the modern communications were shut up, running water would stop, and all the banks, schools, hospitals and post offices were closed. ⑽Without power, the result would be terrible.
（第二段中用for one thing, for another這兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)分別列舉在沒(méi)有電的情況下可能產(chǎn)生的兩個(gè)結(jié)果，這一寫(xiě)作方法值得學(xué)習(xí)。還有像a state of confusion(一片混亂), go without … (忍受……缺乏〈之苦〉), for example(例如), shut up(關(guān)閉)短語(yǔ)用得恰到好處。）
�、蟃herefore, people should realize the importance of electricity and do everything to guarantee a steady supply of power. ⑿On the one hand, we should cultivate a sense of saving electricity. ⒀On the other hand, more power stations should be built and other energy resources must be found so as to provide sufficient power for the increasing demand.
�。ǖ谌沃杏玫煤玫脑~有：guarantee(保證), steady(穩(wěn)定的；持續(xù)的), cultivate(培養(yǎng)), sufficient(充足的) 。用得好的短語(yǔ)有：on the one hand(一方面), on the other hand(另一方面), turn off(關(guān)), so as to … (為了/以便), the increasing demand(不斷增長(zhǎng)的需求).
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic What Would Happen If There Were No Power in three paragraphs. You are given the first sentence or part of the first sentence of each paragraph. Your part of the composition should be no less than 120 words, not including the words given.
What Would Happen If There Were No Power
1. Ever since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ______________________________________________.
2. If there were no electric power，_________________________________, ____________________________________________________________.
3. Therefore, ___________________________________________________.
仔細(xì)閱讀寫(xiě)作題目后，我們知道，題目是個(gè)帶條件狀語(yǔ)從句的疑問(wèn)句，引導(dǎo)我們對(duì)主題（electric power）進(jìn)行深入的思考，讓我們假設(shè)在沒(méi)有的電的情況下會(huì)發(fā)生什么。雖然提綱給出段首部分，但除第一段是給出段首句外，第二段給的是一個(gè)虛擬的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，第三段僅給了一個(gè)承上啟下、表示因果關(guān)系的副詞。仔細(xì)分析所給的提綱后，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)這三個(gè)段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系：第一段從正面闡述“電是現(xiàn)代生活中一個(gè)重要部分”，第二段從反面證明電的重要性，第三段則總結(jié)前面的論述。
編列提綱
分析提綱后，我們知道，第一段中給出的段首句同時(shí)也是主題句。該段的主題是electricity，支配思想是an essential part of our modern life，即：
Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life.
Topic Controlling idea采集者退散
因此，第一段必須圍繞“電”這一主題展開(kāi)，必須用與現(xiàn)代生活相關(guān)的事例來(lái)證明“電已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活中的一個(gè)重要部分”。因此，我們可以用舉例法展開(kāi)這個(gè)段落。我們知道，電與現(xiàn)代生活是息息相關(guān)的。比如，我們晚上用電燈照明，看電視、聽(tīng)廣播離不開(kāi)電，像空調(diào)、電冰箱、微波爐等許多家用電器都離不開(kāi)電�？梢哉f(shuō)，現(xiàn)代生活已離不開(kāi)電。
第二段只給我們一個(gè)虛擬的條件狀語(yǔ)從句（注意主句也要用虛擬語(yǔ)氣），要求我們闡述在假設(shè)的條件（如果沒(méi)有電）成立下可能產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果。因此，我們可采用因果關(guān)系法（中的結(jié)果分析型）發(fā)展這一段落。那么，我們?cè)O(shè)想一下，如果沒(méi)有電，會(huì)產(chǎn)生什么結(jié)果呢？不用說(shuō)，如果沒(méi)有電，世界肯定會(huì)大亂，也會(huì)給人們的生活帶來(lái)諸多不便。比如，工廠無(wú)法產(chǎn)生產(chǎn)品，許多現(xiàn)代化的通訊設(shè)施也無(wú)法使用，學(xué)生無(wú)法正常上學(xué)，商店、銀行、郵局也無(wú)法提供服務(wù)。
第三段給出Therefore一詞，提醒我們應(yīng)對(duì)前面的論述進(jìn)行總結(jié)。我們可采用“建議與結(jié)論”相結(jié)合的結(jié)尾方法展開(kāi)結(jié)尾段。我們可先總結(jié)前面的論述，讓人們認(rèn)識(shí)到電的重要性，必須確保穩(wěn)定、充足的電力供應(yīng)。但怎樣才能做到這一點(diǎn)呢？一方面，我們要呼吁人們養(yǎng)成節(jié)約用電的習(xí)慣；另一方面，我們又要多建電站和尋找其他可轉(zhuǎn)化為電的能源，以滿足不斷增長(zhǎng)的用電需求。經(jīng)過(guò)一番思索，我們可以列出下列提綱：
Topic: ElectricityQuestion: What would happen if there were no power?
Outline:I. Electricity has become an essential part of our modern life.1. Essential for electricity lamps2. Essential for TV or radio3. Essential for many other household applianceII. If no power, our world would be in a state of confusion.1. No essential industrial products2. Life – seriously affecteda. No modern communicationb. No running waterc. No services III. Electricity has become an essential part of our modern life and we should guarantee a steady supply of power.1. Save electric power2. Build more power stations3. Find other energy resourcesIntroductionBody Conclusion
參考范文
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⑴Ever since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ⑵The most obvious example is that electricity lamps give us light at night. ⑶Besides, electricity is needed when we watch TV or listen to the radio. ⑷Electricity is also essential for many household appliances such as air-conditioners, refrigerators and microwave stoves. ⑸In a word, there is hardly anything in our modern life that has nothing to do with electric power.（第一段的第一句是主題句，指出“自上個(gè)世紀(jì)初以來(lái)，電已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活中重要的一部分”。接著用舉例法發(fā)展這一段落，舉出三個(gè)例子充分論證作者的觀點(diǎn)。結(jié)尾句重申了電的重要性，指出現(xiàn)代生活中幾乎沒(méi)有什么東西與電是毫不相關(guān)的。） ⑹If there were no power, our world would be in a state of confusion. ⑺For one thing, machines in factories would stop running and we would have to go without many essential industrial products. ⑻For another, our life would be seriously affected. ⑼For example, all the modern communications were shut up, running water would stop, and all the banks, schools, hospitals and post offices were closed. ⑽Without power, the result would be terrible.（第二段的第一句也是主題句，指出“如果沒(méi)有電，世界將一片混亂”。接著用列舉法闡述沒(méi)有電所帶來(lái)的兩個(gè)結(jié)果，并舉例說(shuō)明因此給我們的生活帶來(lái)的諸多不便。結(jié)尾句重申了沒(méi)有電可能產(chǎn)生的后果的嚴(yán)重性。⑾Therefore, people should realize the importance of electricity and do everything to guarantee a steady supply of power. ⑿On the one hand, we should cultivate a sense of saving electric power. ⒀On the other hand, more power stations should be built and other energy resources must be found so as to provide sufficient power for the increasing demand. （第三段第一句對(duì)前面的論述進(jìn)行了總結(jié)：人們應(yīng)當(dāng)認(rèn)識(shí)到電的重要性，并采取一切措施保證穩(wěn)定的電力供應(yīng)。作者還建議人們應(yīng)采取行動(dòng)，確保不會(huì)發(fā)生沒(méi)有電的情況。為了滿足日益增長(zhǎng)的用電的需要，作者建議我們一方面要養(yǎng)成節(jié)約用力的習(xí)慣；另一方面我們應(yīng)多建電站，尋找其他的能源。⑴主題句⑵例一⑶例二⑷例三⑸結(jié)尾句⑹主題句⑺結(jié)果一⑻結(jié)果二⑼舉例說(shuō)明結(jié)果二⑽結(jié)尾句⑾總結(jié)全文⑿建議一⒀建議二
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�、臙ver since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ⑵The most obvious example is that electricity lamps give us light at night. ⑶Besides, electricity is needed when we watch TV or listen to the radio. ⑷Electricity is also essential for many household appliances such as air-conditioners, refrigerators and microwave stoves. ⑸In a word, there is hardly anything in our modern life that has nothing to do with electric power.
�。ǖ谝欢沃杏行┰~用得很恰當(dāng)，如essential(必不可少的；最重要的), obvious(明顯的)。有些短語(yǔ)也用得不錯(cuò)，如be essential for(對(duì)……是必不可少的), such as(例如), in a word(換句話說(shuō)), have nothing to do with … (與……毫無(wú)關(guān)系)等。另外，表語(yǔ)從句The most obvious example is that … 也用得很恰當(dāng)。）
�、蔍f there were no power, our world would be in a state of confusion. ⑺For one thing, machines in factories would stop running and we would have to go without many essential industrial products. ⑻For another, our life would be seriously affected. ⑼For example, all the modern communications were shut up, running water would stop, and all the banks, schools, hospitals and post offices were closed. ⑽Without power, the result would be terrible.
（第二段中用for one thing, for another這兩個(gè)短語(yǔ)分別列舉在沒(méi)有電的情況下可能產(chǎn)生的兩個(gè)結(jié)果，這一寫(xiě)作方法值得學(xué)習(xí)。還有像a state of confusion(一片混亂), go without … (忍受……缺乏〈之苦〉), for example(例如), shut up(關(guān)閉)短語(yǔ)用得恰到好處。）
�、蟃herefore, people should realize the importance of electricity and do everything to guarantee a steady supply of power. ⑿On the one hand, we should cultivate a sense of saving electricity. ⒀On the other hand, more power stations should be built and other energy resources must be found so as to provide sufficient power for the increasing demand.
�。ǖ谌沃杏玫煤玫脑~有：guarantee(保證), steady(穩(wěn)定的；持續(xù)的), cultivate(培養(yǎng)), sufficient(充足的) 。用得好的短語(yǔ)有：on the one hand(一方面), on the other hand(另一方面), turn off(關(guān)), so as to … (為了/以便), the increasing demand(不斷增長(zhǎng)的需求).
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic What Would Happen If There Were No Power in three paragraphs. You are given the first sentence or part of the first sentence of each paragraph. Your part of the composition should be no less than 120 words, not including the words given.
What Would Happen If There Were No Power
1. Ever since early last century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. ______________________________________________.
2. If there were no electric power，_________________________________, ____________________________________________________________.
3. Therefore, ___________________________________________________.
