2007年蘇州市中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文范文
假設(shè)某英語(yǔ)雜志“奧運(yùn)來(lái)了”欄目正在舉辦征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的“奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽”和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)以“中國(guó)印-----舞動(dòng)的北京”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文,參加比賽。
內(nèi)容:
會(huì)徽設(shè)計(jì)成中國(guó)印,名為“中國(guó)印-----舞動(dòng)的北京”;
印中的“京”字代表北京,像個(gè)舞者,向世界展開(kāi)雙臂;
印是紅色的,下面寫(xiě)有“北京2008”,紅色代表好運(yùn);
“舞動(dòng)的北京”使你想到……..(考生自擬,至少一點(diǎn))。
注意:
詞數(shù)90字左右。短文的標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.
2007年蘇州市中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文范文
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.
I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.
點(diǎn)評(píng):作者準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了提示內(nèi)容所要表達(dá)的意思,雖然看起來(lái)有點(diǎn)像翻譯,但是即便是翻譯,也是很到位的,這不是每個(gè)初中生都能完成的。在語(yǔ)言方面,作者顯得非常地嫻熟老練,比如be designed to, appear, represent等難詞的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)作者厚實(shí)的積累,此外,作者還非常自然地使用了狀語(yǔ),同謂語(yǔ),后置修飾語(yǔ)等手法使一句話(huà)傳達(dá)了很豐富的意思。
假設(shè)某英語(yǔ)雜志“奧運(yùn)來(lái)了”欄目正在舉辦征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的“奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽”和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),用英語(yǔ)以“中國(guó)印-----舞動(dòng)的北京”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文,參加比賽。
內(nèi)容:
會(huì)徽設(shè)計(jì)成中國(guó)印,名為“中國(guó)印-----舞動(dòng)的北京”;
印中的“京”字代表北京,像個(gè)舞者,向世界展開(kāi)雙臂;
印是紅色的,下面寫(xiě)有“北京2008”,紅色代表好運(yùn);
“舞動(dòng)的北京”使你想到……..(考生自擬,至少一點(diǎn))。
注意:
詞數(shù)90字左右。短文的標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.
2007年蘇州市中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文范文
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奧運(yùn)會(huì)徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.
I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.
點(diǎn)評(píng):作者準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了提示內(nèi)容所要表達(dá)的意思,雖然看起來(lái)有點(diǎn)像翻譯,但是即便是翻譯,也是很到位的,這不是每個(gè)初中生都能完成的。在語(yǔ)言方面,作者顯得非常地嫻熟老練,比如be designed to, appear, represent等難詞的運(yùn)用體現(xiàn)作者厚實(shí)的積累,此外,作者還非常自然地使用了狀語(yǔ),同謂語(yǔ),后置修飾語(yǔ)等手法使一句話(huà)傳達(dá)了很豐富的意思。