2007年湖南懷化市中考英語滿分作文范文
初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場，回想自己在父母和師長的關(guān)愛和幫助下的成長過程，心中充滿感戴之情。請根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語給父母或老師寫一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意。

感謝對象：Father Mother Miss Gao

參考用語：take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…，thankful, work hard, try to do better…

注意：1. 感謝對象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請避用真實(shí)姓名和校名。

2. 除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受。

3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

Dear _______________,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

2007年湖南懷化市中考英語滿分作文范文
Dear Miss Gao,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours

Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評：作者巧妙地把所有的提示詞融入到文章中，完整得敘述了對老師的感激之情以及感激老師的理由。本文銜接自然流暢，前后連貫，層層推進(jìn)。本文的特點(diǎn)是作者使用了很多復(fù)合句， 狀語從句，可見作者對初中階段的句型掌握地還是很扎實(shí)的。