2011年7月GMAT作文機經AI(至7.12)
1.
V1： issue是 constant innovation and change 能為企業(yè)帶來improvement的同時也會帶來一樣damage
用的 as as 結構 具體不記得了 improvement在后面一個as后的 就一句話
自己也就分improve和damage兩個方面寫應該也還好完成吧
感謝chenr523
V2：.AI: the constant innovation and change within an organization is as likely
to damage the organization as to improve it.
感謝jerryzx
題庫原題：Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to
damage the organization as they are to improve to it.
感謝racy616
考古：
V1Innovation and changes are as likely do damage to an organization as do good
to it. 大意就是創(chuàng)新和變化能夠給一個組織帶來的不良影響并不比好的影響少。
V2Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage
the organization as they are to improve it.
3.Issue是
No.87“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”87. “當某項特定服務的技術和需求改變時，很多工人將失業(yè)。適應這種改變的責任屬于每個工人而不是政府或企業(yè)�！�
非常感謝luckyxmx 提供這么好的原始材料~~~：）
提供觀點：
觀點： 工人自己要負責 (程序猿的例子); 政府也要負責(中國代工工廠的例子)； 商業(yè)機構也要負責(relocate+training to retool the employee)
1、The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
2、The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
3、Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.
5. AI financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.
題庫原題：31. “Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.”
提供觀點：
1. 把收入作為選擇職業(yè)的首要考慮因素會使人忽視了生命中更應該追求的其他東西。事實上有許多人為了追求更為重要的目標而放棄了使自己獲得收入的職業(yè)。象是特蕾莎修女，她以助人為快樂。盡管在物質上是清貧的但是卻在別人快樂的同時自己也得到了幸福的回報。Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India. Although she was not rich all through her life, she was happier than most of her contemporaries because she gained happiness when she helped the poor. bliss blessedness 還有一些人為了做全職家長更好的照顧孩子更是完全犧牲了得到錢的職業(yè)。在他們看來和家人在一起生活照顧他們的起居飲食是自己最開心的事情。
2. 誠然經濟基礎是一切其他活動的前提，但追求錢以外更重要的目標并不一定意味著就會得不到物質回報或者是一定會過得潦倒。事實上兩者是可以相互促進的。一個追求智力上或者是創(chuàng)造力上的成就的人象是作家藝術家或者是音樂家當他們的作品問世時候他們同時也得到了物質的回報。others choose to pursue intellectual or creative fulfillment-as writers, artists, or musicians. 而這些錢反過來又會為他們的創(chuàng)作提供更好的條件和環(huán)境.
6. AI：increasing emphasis on global economy and cooperation, people need to understand their role as citizens of world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.
題庫原題：40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
提供觀點：
1. 兩者并不是完全對立的環(huán)保
2. 事實上兩者可以相互促進一個人在一個國家做慈善工作很可能也會有一天為別的國家的人服務
3. 當兩者沖突的時候哪個更重要取決與不同的情況。
1.
V1： issue是 constant innovation and change 能為企業(yè)帶來improvement的同時也會帶來一樣damage
用的 as as 結構 具體不記得了 improvement在后面一個as后的 就一句話
自己也就分improve和damage兩個方面寫應該也還好完成吧
感謝chenr523
V2：.AI: the constant innovation and change within an organization is as likely
to damage the organization as to improve it.
感謝jerryzx
題庫原題：Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to
damage the organization as they are to improve to it.
感謝racy616
考古：
V1Innovation and changes are as likely do damage to an organization as do good
to it. 大意就是創(chuàng)新和變化能夠給一個組織帶來的不良影響并不比好的影響少。
V2Constant innovation and change within an organization are as likely to damage
the organization as they are to improve it.
3.Issue是
No.87“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”87. “當某項特定服務的技術和需求改變時，很多工人將失業(yè)。適應這種改變的責任屬于每個工人而不是政府或企業(yè)�！�
非常感謝luckyxmx 提供這么好的原始材料~~~：）
提供觀點：
觀點： 工人自己要負責 (程序猿的例子); 政府也要負責(中國代工工廠的例子)； 商業(yè)機構也要負責(relocate+training to retool the employee)
1、The government should be responsible for the adjustment of the workers. If all the citizens should be responsible for themselves, there is no use for the government to exist.
2、The government should also force the business to involve in the project. Because the government itself is incapable of doing so without concrete knowledge of each certain industry. In the long run, doing so will also benefit the business.
3、Admittedly, the workers should not rely on others to help them to adjust to varying situations. They themselves should adapt their skills and knowledge to the change of the industry and of the society.
5. AI financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.
題庫原題：31. “Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.”
提供觀點：
1. 把收入作為選擇職業(yè)的首要考慮因素會使人忽視了生命中更應該追求的其他東西。事實上有許多人為了追求更為重要的目標而放棄了使自己獲得收入的職業(yè)。象是特蕾莎修女，她以助人為快樂。盡管在物質上是清貧的但是卻在別人快樂的同時自己也得到了幸福的回報。Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India. Although she was not rich all through her life, she was happier than most of her contemporaries because she gained happiness when she helped the poor. bliss blessedness 還有一些人為了做全職家長更好的照顧孩子更是完全犧牲了得到錢的職業(yè)。在他們看來和家人在一起生活照顧他們的起居飲食是自己最開心的事情。
2. 誠然經濟基礎是一切其他活動的前提，但追求錢以外更重要的目標并不一定意味著就會得不到物質回報或者是一定會過得潦倒。事實上兩者是可以相互促進的。一個追求智力上或者是創(chuàng)造力上的成就的人象是作家藝術家或者是音樂家當他們的作品問世時候他們同時也得到了物質的回報。others choose to pursue intellectual or creative fulfillment-as writers, artists, or musicians. 而這些錢反過來又會為他們的創(chuàng)作提供更好的條件和環(huán)境.
6. AI：increasing emphasis on global economy and cooperation, people need to understand their role as citizens of world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.
題庫原題：40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
提供觀點：
1. 兩者并不是完全對立的環(huán)保
2. 事實上兩者可以相互促進一個人在一個國家做慈善工作很可能也會有一天為別的國家的人服務
3. 當兩者沖突的時候哪個更重要取決與不同的情況。
