GMAT真題:2010年11月作文AI(至11.30)(八)
1. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 bywyfcinderella
題庫65. “The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity*. Because people everywhere are beginning to want the same products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.”
* homogeneity: sameness, similarity
1. The so-called cultural innovation does exists. Let's take KFC as an example. Its standard design, decoration and food supplied in every chain all around the world influence people consume its product and service.
2. However, to say the multinational corporations do no good to promote and improve the unique culture of the nations where their branches are located is very imprudent.
3. Ideally, the multinational corporations should incorporate the culture of the target country's cultrue with the corporate culture and the culture it belongs to.
反對。
1, 首先,前提是錯誤的。因為各地差異不同,所以全球化的大公司,想在所有地方都提供一樣的產(chǎn)品服務是不現(xiàn)實的。empirical evidence: 很多成功的大企業(yè),往往是那些充分認識到不同,從而采用不同的策略的。不能保持完全一致的策略,let alone 更不用說完全一樣的產(chǎn)品和服務。比如:KFC等fast food,在中國都針對口味偏好開發(fā)了很多新產(chǎn)品。
2, Moreover, 地區(qū)差異不會消失,有更深層次的原因on much deeper level。第一,文化的差異,信仰的不同,很難靠產(chǎn)品和服務改變。比如,即使使用最先進的日本Panasonic產(chǎn)的電視,美國人用來傳播transmit democratic principles, while中國人可能用來publicize the thoughts of Mao, or Confucius… 第二,習俗的差異,custom。比如,盡管很多年輕人在中國開始celebrate the Valentine’s Day, 但是在所有中國人心中,最重要的節(jié)日仍然是Spring Festival。這是什么樣的產(chǎn)品都不能改變的。
Optional words:
Homogeneity/ homogeneous/ homogenize/
Difference/ divergence/ deviation/ variance/ disagreement/ conflict
Thesis sentence:
View1: the development of multinational corporations does enhance global unity by bringing the same methods of business administration as well as products and services throughout the world.
Evidence: western fast food bring by global chain express such us McDonald’sand KFC have change our diet habits a lot
View2: however, the effect of multinational corporations is far from eliminating regional deference. The corporations itself is blend in the regional features.
Evidence: Lay’s, one of the most successful multinational food manufacturers, add some flavor of traditional Asian dishes to its potato chips in order to attract foreign customers.
7. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 by ly950701
題庫13. “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”
1, 個人往往是按照自己的利益辦事即使有環(huán)保意愿但和個人利益沖突或要損失個人利益時候往往就會選擇犧牲環(huán)境moreover個人往往是短視的,只關(guān)注眼前不注意長遠。政府則相反
2, 環(huán)保常常規(guī)模很大,個人無力完成。
3, 誠然每個保護環(huán)境的措施都是要個人的參與的。但是這種參與是在政府的統(tǒng)籌下的。象作者那樣的論斷是草率的
a tug of war拔河,兩派間的激烈競爭 a political tug of war between those in favor of the new legislation and those against it.
large in scale participation participate ensure preservation individual
on behalf of 為了 at large 逍遙自在不受限制的;全體地普遍地
Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large.
complete elimination emission automobile nevertheless不過 manufacturer manufacture because voluntarily volunteer voluntary volunteer voluntary voluntarily sacrifice accomplish
regulatory調(diào)整的 enforcement impose necessary standard ensure achieve aside from inherently inherent pandemic全國流行的 epidemic流行的 traverse border environment environmental hazard enemy analysis authority authoritative possess attainment agreed-upon 意見一致的
1, The proponents of this assertion may argue that the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, therefore, it is reasonable to attribute to each person the responsibility for preserving it. a, 必須要承認的是,我們共同使用環(huán)境資源,the condition of the environment may have directly effect on each person。所以,人人都has the obligation to protect the environment from being polluted. b, 只有人人都積極地保護環(huán)境,
2, However, to leave all the responsibility to individuals is hardly a wise decision. Despite of the argument above, we should still not lose the sight of the fact that individuals have strong propensity of self-interest and short-term consideration. 沒有政府的監(jiān)督,很少有人自愿作出犧牲以保護環(huán)境(voluntarily make sacrifice to protect the environment.)比如如果政府不forbidden smoking in public,smokers may enjoy their cigarettes whenever they want. Deforestation kill excessively
很多情況下,重大fatal的保護環(huán)境舉措,沒有政府的支持做不到。比如工廠dumping noxious water into the river/ deforestation/ kill excessively…以上那些行動,個人的力量根本不能阻止prohibit.
Optional words:
Preserve/ conserve/ maintain
Thesis sentence: While individual person can do a lot to protect our natural environment, the responsibility of preservation the overall environment lies in the hands of government with help form each individual in the society.
View1: Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large.
View2:the government has certain advantages in preserving the environment.
Evidence:
the government can place certain regulations on the wastes and pollutants towards environment emitted by industries.
Fines deprived from corporations and individual ones that disobey the environmental regulations can be used on many ways such as preserve the forests, planting trees, create conserved areas that will improve our current situations.
8. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 by qddxzhaowencon, harbinwang
8. 出現(xiàn)頻率2
題庫40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
1. 兩者并不是完全對立的環(huán)保
2. 事實上兩者可以相互促進一個人在一個國家做慈善工作很可能也會有一天為別的國家的人服務
3. 當兩者沖突的時候哪個更重要取決與不同的情況。
代替取代supersede compatible be compatible with... citizenship domain This one person would be acting consistently as a citizen of community, state, nation and world.admittedly conflicting obligation arise dual Admittedly, conflicting/clashing/discordant obligations sometimes arise as a result of our new dual citizenship.obligatory In sum, although our "dual" citizenship may at times lead to conflict, one role need not automatically take precedence over the other. more often than not The relationship between the two roles is, more often than not, a complementary one, and can even be synergistic. synergistic coactive complement complementary supplement
1. 有時, 很多問題是全球性的,需要世界公民的角度考慮,而非只站在一國角度. 比如,環(huán)境問題, 能源問題, 等等. 人們應該為整個地球負責任,而不僅僅是為了一個民族或國家. 因為, 如果是后者, 則很有可能只解決自己的問題, 而把危害轉(zhuǎn)移到別的國家. shift the burden and threats from one nation to another…比如: 出口垃圾,比如大量進口發(fā)展中國家的木材.雖然自己的國家暫時解決了問題,但長遠看, 沒有國家孤立地存在, 不能short-sight and narrow mind, 因為interdependent.
2. 但這不意味著人們就要discard or weaken their role as citizens of one nation. 其實兩者并不是incompatible, 更多時候, 可以作為complementary one—and can even be synergistic.比如the preservation of traditional culture, 人們作為一國公民,保護自己獨特文化的同時, 實際上也為全球的diversity of culture作出了positive effort. 比如, 為一個國家的public service付出努力的同時, 很可能激發(fā)起公民的社會責任感和compassion and responsibility, 參與到國際public service 中, 比如很多charitarian就開始從對本國的慈善事業(yè)subsidize the school in one nation也激發(fā)起對attention to the education in the international scope.
View1: people’s role as citizens of the world is become more and more important in the modern society.
View2: Without the awareness of being citizens of a particular country, people will find no roots to behave on the stage of the world.
View3: these two roles, national and international, are not mutually exclusive alternatives. They can be properly combined.
1. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 bywyfcinderella
題庫65. “The rise of multinational corporations is leading to global homogeneity*. Because people everywhere are beginning to want the same products and services, regional differences are rapidly disappearing.”
* homogeneity: sameness, similarity
1. The so-called cultural innovation does exists. Let's take KFC as an example. Its standard design, decoration and food supplied in every chain all around the world influence people consume its product and service.
2. However, to say the multinational corporations do no good to promote and improve the unique culture of the nations where their branches are located is very imprudent.
3. Ideally, the multinational corporations should incorporate the culture of the target country's cultrue with the corporate culture and the culture it belongs to.
反對。
1, 首先,前提是錯誤的。因為各地差異不同,所以全球化的大公司,想在所有地方都提供一樣的產(chǎn)品服務是不現(xiàn)實的。empirical evidence: 很多成功的大企業(yè),往往是那些充分認識到不同,從而采用不同的策略的。不能保持完全一致的策略,let alone 更不用說完全一樣的產(chǎn)品和服務。比如:KFC等fast food,在中國都針對口味偏好開發(fā)了很多新產(chǎn)品。
2, Moreover, 地區(qū)差異不會消失,有更深層次的原因on much deeper level。第一,文化的差異,信仰的不同,很難靠產(chǎn)品和服務改變。比如,即使使用最先進的日本Panasonic產(chǎn)的電視,美國人用來傳播transmit democratic principles, while中國人可能用來publicize the thoughts of Mao, or Confucius… 第二,習俗的差異,custom。比如,盡管很多年輕人在中國開始celebrate the Valentine’s Day, 但是在所有中國人心中,最重要的節(jié)日仍然是Spring Festival。這是什么樣的產(chǎn)品都不能改變的。
Optional words:
Homogeneity/ homogeneous/ homogenize/
Difference/ divergence/ deviation/ variance/ disagreement/ conflict
Thesis sentence:
View1: the development of multinational corporations does enhance global unity by bringing the same methods of business administration as well as products and services throughout the world.
Evidence: western fast food bring by global chain express such us McDonald’sand KFC have change our diet habits a lot
View2: however, the effect of multinational corporations is far from eliminating regional deference. The corporations itself is blend in the regional features.
Evidence: Lay’s, one of the most successful multinational food manufacturers, add some flavor of traditional Asian dishes to its potato chips in order to attract foreign customers.
7. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 by ly950701
題庫13. “Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”
1, 個人往往是按照自己的利益辦事即使有環(huán)保意愿但和個人利益沖突或要損失個人利益時候往往就會選擇犧牲環(huán)境moreover個人往往是短視的,只關(guān)注眼前不注意長遠。政府則相反
2, 環(huán)保常常規(guī)模很大,個人無力完成。
3, 誠然每個保護環(huán)境的措施都是要個人的參與的。但是這種參與是在政府的統(tǒng)籌下的。象作者那樣的論斷是草率的
a tug of war拔河,兩派間的激烈競爭 a political tug of war between those in favor of the new legislation and those against it.
large in scale participation participate ensure preservation individual
on behalf of 為了 at large 逍遙自在不受限制的;全體地普遍地
Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large.
complete elimination emission automobile nevertheless不過 manufacturer manufacture because voluntarily volunteer voluntary volunteer voluntary voluntarily sacrifice accomplish
regulatory調(diào)整的 enforcement impose necessary standard ensure achieve aside from inherently inherent pandemic全國流行的 epidemic流行的 traverse border environment environmental hazard enemy analysis authority authoritative possess attainment agreed-upon 意見一致的
1, The proponents of this assertion may argue that the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, therefore, it is reasonable to attribute to each person the responsibility for preserving it. a, 必須要承認的是,我們共同使用環(huán)境資源,the condition of the environment may have directly effect on each person。所以,人人都has the obligation to protect the environment from being polluted. b, 只有人人都積極地保護環(huán)境,
2, However, to leave all the responsibility to individuals is hardly a wise decision. Despite of the argument above, we should still not lose the sight of the fact that individuals have strong propensity of self-interest and short-term consideration. 沒有政府的監(jiān)督,很少有人自愿作出犧牲以保護環(huán)境(voluntarily make sacrifice to protect the environment.)比如如果政府不forbidden smoking in public,smokers may enjoy their cigarettes whenever they want. Deforestation kill excessively
很多情況下,重大fatal的保護環(huán)境舉措,沒有政府的支持做不到。比如工廠dumping noxious water into the river/ deforestation/ kill excessively…以上那些行動,個人的力量根本不能阻止prohibit.
Optional words:
Preserve/ conserve/ maintain
Thesis sentence: While individual person can do a lot to protect our natural environment, the responsibility of preservation the overall environment lies in the hands of government with help form each individual in the society.
View1: Experience tells us that individuals tend to act on behalf of their own short-term economic and political interest, not on behalf of the environment or the public at large.
View2:the government has certain advantages in preserving the environment.
Evidence:
the government can place certain regulations on the wastes and pollutants towards environment emitted by industries.
Fines deprived from corporations and individual ones that disobey the environmental regulations can be used on many ways such as preserve the forests, planting trees, create conserved areas that will improve our current situations.
8. 出現(xiàn)日期:11.26 by qddxzhaowencon, harbinwang
8. 出現(xiàn)頻率2
題庫40. “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.”
1. 兩者并不是完全對立的環(huán)保
2. 事實上兩者可以相互促進一個人在一個國家做慈善工作很可能也會有一天為別的國家的人服務
3. 當兩者沖突的時候哪個更重要取決與不同的情況。
代替取代supersede compatible be compatible with... citizenship domain This one person would be acting consistently as a citizen of community, state, nation and world.admittedly conflicting obligation arise dual Admittedly, conflicting/clashing/discordant obligations sometimes arise as a result of our new dual citizenship.obligatory In sum, although our "dual" citizenship may at times lead to conflict, one role need not automatically take precedence over the other. more often than not The relationship between the two roles is, more often than not, a complementary one, and can even be synergistic. synergistic coactive complement complementary supplement
1. 有時, 很多問題是全球性的,需要世界公民的角度考慮,而非只站在一國角度. 比如,環(huán)境問題, 能源問題, 等等. 人們應該為整個地球負責任,而不僅僅是為了一個民族或國家. 因為, 如果是后者, 則很有可能只解決自己的問題, 而把危害轉(zhuǎn)移到別的國家. shift the burden and threats from one nation to another…比如: 出口垃圾,比如大量進口發(fā)展中國家的木材.雖然自己的國家暫時解決了問題,但長遠看, 沒有國家孤立地存在, 不能short-sight and narrow mind, 因為interdependent.
2. 但這不意味著人們就要discard or weaken their role as citizens of one nation. 其實兩者并不是incompatible, 更多時候, 可以作為complementary one—and can even be synergistic.比如the preservation of traditional culture, 人們作為一國公民,保護自己獨特文化的同時, 實際上也為全球的diversity of culture作出了positive effort. 比如, 為一個國家的public service付出努力的同時, 很可能激發(fā)起公民的社會責任感和compassion and responsibility, 參與到國際public service 中, 比如很多charitarian就開始從對本國的慈善事業(yè)subsidize the school in one nation也激發(fā)起對attention to the education in the international scope.
View1: people’s role as citizens of the world is become more and more important in the modern society.
View2: Without the awareness of being citizens of a particular country, people will find no roots to behave on the stage of the world.
View3: these two roles, national and international, are not mutually exclusive alternatives. They can be properly combined.