會(huì)計(jì)碩士:mpacc英語(yǔ)輔導(dǎo)寫(xiě)作指南(2)
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三)意義連貫
文章的層次要分明,條理要清楚,上下文之間、詞與詞、句與句之間要上下連貫,前后呼應(yīng),才能使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),思路清晰、有條理。
下面這個(gè)段落是一篇文章的第三段。文章的標(biāo)題是:Good Health;提綱是1.Importance of good health;2.Ways to keep fit;3.My own practice。根據(jù)第三段的提綱"我的做法",一個(gè)考生這樣寫(xiě):
I don′t eat meat much.Every morning I take the long run and in my spare time I like playing tennis and volleyball.In this way I keep good health and lead a happy life.
上段基本切題,包括提綱要點(diǎn),表達(dá)也基本清楚,但是表達(dá)不夠連貫。第一句話(huà)讓人讀起來(lái)感覺(jué)有些突然,分析第一句,作者沒(méi)有把意思表達(dá)清楚,作者?quot;我吃肉不多"一定含有這樣的意思:我飲食素淡,吃蔬菜水果多,吃肉少。如果能把這層意思寫(xiě)出來(lái),文章的連貫性也就體現(xiàn)出來(lái)了。作者的第二句是從體育鍛煉方面來(lái)表明自己是如何保持健康的,這應(yīng)是本段中的又一層意思,在這里如能加一個(gè)過(guò)渡詞,會(huì)使文章過(guò)渡自然流暢。請(qǐng)看下面經(jīng)過(guò)修改的段落:
As for me(1),I enjoy a good health as I keep a simple diet with more vegetables,fruit and less meat.Moreover,I do some exercises whenever I have time such as long distance running,playing tennis or volleyball.As a result(2),I have been a top student all through the four years in the university.So good health is important to everyone(3).
(1)發(fā)揮了承上啟下的作用,沒(méi)有這樣一個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ),從第二段過(guò)渡到第三段就會(huì)顯得生硬一些。(2)也起到了連貫作用,在上述兩方面保持健康的方法介紹完后,應(yīng)該進(jìn)一步寫(xiě)出所產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果,這結(jié)果就是對(duì)全段的總結(jié)概括。(3)對(duì)文章的標(biāo)題及開(kāi)頭起了首尾呼應(yīng)的作用。
(四)無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤一般指時(shí)態(tài)不一致、主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)單復(fù)數(shù)形式不一致、用詞不當(dāng)?shù)龋@些問(wèn)題的存在說(shuō)明考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中很少練習(xí)寫(xiě)作,有人甚至從沒(méi)寫(xiě)過(guò)作文,因而出現(xiàn)各種各樣語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤是可以理解的。考生應(yīng)在考前多進(jìn)行這方面的訓(xùn)練,一些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤在實(shí)踐中是可以糾正過(guò)來(lái)的。下面舉幾例常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤。
病句及其分析:
1.So colleg e provid e the best condition for students.
此句的主謂語(yǔ)不一致。因?yàn)榫渥拥囊馑际欠褐复髮W(xué)為學(xué)生提供了的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境,這里的主語(yǔ)college應(yīng)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。這類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤極為常見(jiàn)。
2.Going to college does not followed that We′ll have a splendid future.
此句的主語(yǔ)是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ),全句的意思是:上大學(xué)并不表示我們的未來(lái)就一定會(huì)光輝燦爛。does not后應(yīng)跟動(dòng)詞原型follow。
3.Second,have a part time job for poor student is a good way to help reduce his family burden.
此句中有兩處錯(cuò)誤。have a part time job不能直接作主語(yǔ),可以改為不定式作主語(yǔ)to have a part time job,或者動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)having a part time job。第二處錯(cuò)誤是poor student。普通名詞前應(yīng)有冠詞a或the,如前面沒(méi)有冠詞,名詞應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。在這里可選用不定冠詞,a poor student,或者poor students。在此句中為了與后半句中的his呼應(yīng)將其改為a poor student為好。
4.In recent years,fake goods have been discovered more and more in the market.
第四句是中文式的英文,這是考生作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤。按照英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣可改為More and more fake goods have been discovered in the market in recent years.
5.The first hand I think is that law must be passed to prevent fake goods from being produced.
文章的層次要分明,條理要清楚,上下文之間、詞與詞、句與句之間要上下連貫,前后呼應(yīng),才能使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),思路清晰、有條理。
下面這個(gè)段落是一篇文章的第三段。文章的標(biāo)題是:Good Health;提綱是1.Importance of good health;2.Ways to keep fit;3.My own practice。根據(jù)第三段的提綱"我的做法",一個(gè)考生這樣寫(xiě):
I don′t eat meat much.Every morning I take the long run and in my spare time I like playing tennis and volleyball.In this way I keep good health and lead a happy life.
上段基本切題,包括提綱要點(diǎn),表達(dá)也基本清楚,但是表達(dá)不夠連貫。第一句話(huà)讓人讀起來(lái)感覺(jué)有些突然,分析第一句,作者沒(méi)有把意思表達(dá)清楚,作者?quot;我吃肉不多"一定含有這樣的意思:我飲食素淡,吃蔬菜水果多,吃肉少。如果能把這層意思寫(xiě)出來(lái),文章的連貫性也就體現(xiàn)出來(lái)了。作者的第二句是從體育鍛煉方面來(lái)表明自己是如何保持健康的,這應(yīng)是本段中的又一層意思,在這里如能加一個(gè)過(guò)渡詞,會(huì)使文章過(guò)渡自然流暢。請(qǐng)看下面經(jīng)過(guò)修改的段落:
As for me(1),I enjoy a good health as I keep a simple diet with more vegetables,fruit and less meat.Moreover,I do some exercises whenever I have time such as long distance running,playing tennis or volleyball.As a result(2),I have been a top student all through the four years in the university.So good health is important to everyone(3).
(1)發(fā)揮了承上啟下的作用,沒(méi)有這樣一個(gè)介詞短語(yǔ),從第二段過(guò)渡到第三段就會(huì)顯得生硬一些。(2)也起到了連貫作用,在上述兩方面保持健康的方法介紹完后,應(yīng)該進(jìn)一步寫(xiě)出所產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果,這結(jié)果就是對(duì)全段的總結(jié)概括。(3)對(duì)文章的標(biāo)題及開(kāi)頭起了首尾呼應(yīng)的作用。
(四)無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤一般指時(shí)態(tài)不一致、主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)單復(fù)數(shù)形式不一致、用詞不當(dāng)?shù)龋@些問(wèn)題的存在說(shuō)明考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中很少練習(xí)寫(xiě)作,有人甚至從沒(méi)寫(xiě)過(guò)作文,因而出現(xiàn)各種各樣語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤是可以理解的。考生應(yīng)在考前多進(jìn)行這方面的訓(xùn)練,一些語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤在實(shí)踐中是可以糾正過(guò)來(lái)的。下面舉幾例常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤。
病句及其分析:
1.So colleg e provid e the best condition for students.
此句的主謂語(yǔ)不一致。因?yàn)榫渥拥囊馑际欠褐复髮W(xué)為學(xué)生提供了的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境,這里的主語(yǔ)college應(yīng)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。這類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤極為常見(jiàn)。
2.Going to college does not followed that We′ll have a splendid future.
此句的主語(yǔ)是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ),全句的意思是:上大學(xué)并不表示我們的未來(lái)就一定會(huì)光輝燦爛。does not后應(yīng)跟動(dòng)詞原型follow。
3.Second,have a part time job for poor student is a good way to help reduce his family burden.
此句中有兩處錯(cuò)誤。have a part time job不能直接作主語(yǔ),可以改為不定式作主語(yǔ)to have a part time job,或者動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)having a part time job。第二處錯(cuò)誤是poor student。普通名詞前應(yīng)有冠詞a或the,如前面沒(méi)有冠詞,名詞應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。在這里可選用不定冠詞,a poor student,或者poor students。在此句中為了與后半句中的his呼應(yīng)將其改為a poor student為好。
4.In recent years,fake goods have been discovered more and more in the market.
第四句是中文式的英文,這是考生作文中的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤。按照英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣可改為More and more fake goods have been discovered in the market in recent years.
5.The first hand I think is that law must be passed to prevent fake goods from being produced.
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