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寫作實(shí)例練習(xí)之三

時(shí)間:2009-08-16 14:53:00   來(lái)源:太傻論壇     [字體: ]
寫作練習(xí)3

Directions: think carefully about the issue described in the excerpt below and about the assignment that follow it.

In the last few years, a number of athletes have gone directly from high school to professional sports teams instead of going to college. Some people in sports and education think that these players are too young to deal with the pressures and problems of professional sports.

Assignment: what is your opinion of the idea that high school athletes are too young to handle the celebrity and competitive pressures of professional sports? Plan and write an essay that develops your point of view on the issue. Support your opinion with reasoning and examples from your reading, your class-work, your personal experiences, or your observations.

按照以下的步驟嘗試著聯(lián)系寫作

Tip 控制你的時(shí)間,從步驟一到步驟五給自己5分鐘

步驟一 仔細(xì)的閱讀考題

步驟二 重新思考問(wèn)題,用下滑線標(biāo)出重要詞匯

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步驟三 激發(fā)你的大腦,把你能想到的所有論點(diǎn)寫在下面

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步驟四 從你的所有論點(diǎn)中選出一個(gè),作為你的論點(diǎn)

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步驟五 在你的論點(diǎn)上加以論據(jù),實(shí)例,任何能證明你論點(diǎn)的資料都可以寫上去。寫完后,仔細(xì)考慮那個(gè)論據(jù)更適合你的論點(diǎn)和你的中心思想,不適合的論據(jù)可以被劃掉。

TIP 步驟六,給自己3分鐘的時(shí)間去寫introduction,要注意你的intro要包括你文章的論點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言要盡量抓住讀者心,使讀者能充滿好奇的繼續(xù)讀下去。

步驟六 抓住論點(diǎn)寫出introduction

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步驟七 返回去讀一遍你的intro.確保你闡明了文章的中心。文章的格式也是按著邏輯性來(lái)編寫的。

TIP 現(xiàn)在你應(yīng)該可以用掉了8分鐘的時(shí)間,用8分鐘的時(shí)間寫完你剩下的部分

步驟八 返回去看你剛才列出的論據(jù)。按照邏輯性開(kāi)始寫;

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TIP 不要忘記運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,把每段的文章都連接起來(lái)。

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步驟九

TIP 結(jié)尾,

a 重新編寫你的中心思想,跟簡(jiǎn)介達(dá)到首尾呼應(yīng).

b 把論點(diǎn)重新整理一遍寫上去,強(qiáng)調(diào)你的觀點(diǎn).

c 也是最簡(jiǎn)單的一種方法,就是把論題重新編寫一遍.

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步驟十

TIP 還應(yīng)該剩下2分鐘作為你檢查的時(shí)間

20分鐘的時(shí)間已經(jīng)到了,你完成你的論文了嗎???

查詢SAT寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),給你自己的論文打一個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)吧!

自我評(píng)分(給自己打出1到6分)

Overall impression ( )    

Thesis and purpose ( )    

Organization and development ( )

Use of sentences ( )

Word choice ( )

Grammar and usage( )

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