注同學們的用詞和句型的使用。
高分作文標志
1 ：四級120-150 字；六級150-180 字；
2 是否長短句交叉；
3 用詞是否恰當，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；
4 關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復詞；
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
1.適當用被動代替主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實，句子開頭不要總是用we
/ I （比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be
paid to.）舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的后一段：It is ，therefore ，
high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放
在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般
放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說： Other individuals， however， take the attitude that …
3.一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)
good， bad， many ， thing， think， people ， opinion等等）比如上面例
子中，applicable代替proper， approaches 代替ways， implement代替carry
out ， sharpen one''s competitive edge代替enhance one''s competitiveness
（提高某物競爭力）
下面舉一篇我南京六級班上一位同學寫的優(yōu)秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他
是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換
和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought
me a computer as birthday present ， which exerted a tremendous fascination
on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information
i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night
I was sleepless ， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in
sth.
google替換 search
an army of替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of
computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，
computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing
to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged
by them ， in large measure ！
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某
個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with …非常地道的詞匯，表達＂與…一致＂的意思，替換 With
…
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into （ flood into / swarm into）替換 enter into
Current （ currently）替換 now
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的For a start
，we can ， freely ， search desired information at any moment . Little
by little ， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will
be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online
by chatting ， playing games， or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can， freely ， search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched ， and our horizons will be greatly
broadened.用了非常精彩的被動
