第一步:資格審查,經(jīng)歷重點(diǎn)突出
詳解:以一家五百強(qiáng)日化品牌招聘的美發(fā)沙龍公關(guān)職位為例
Qualification Required:
-University degree or above
-1 years or above PR related experience in agency or beauty industry
-Strong communication skill, negotiation and interpersonal skill
-Strong sense of responsibility, with a positive attitude
-Good English and excellent Chinese, both written and oral
求職資格涵蓋了學(xué)歷要求,經(jīng)歷要求和能力要求。我們可詳寫公關(guān)相關(guān)經(jīng)歷,突出你善于溝通、態(tài)度積極的部分;而其余經(jīng)歷略寫。如果經(jīng)歷翻譯成英文過長,大膽刪掉那些可以弱化的經(jīng)歷。
第二步:職責(zé)加料,地道又準(zhǔn)確!
搜集到的Job Responsibilities怎么加加減減就變成你的經(jīng)歷了呢?標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是:寫清楚并量化你的工作的成果和對所在公司/集體的貢獻(xiàn)!
下面開始機(jī)器人-變身!
1.加具體名稱/背景
例:Support xx Manager to develop “xx”plan and manage “xx”activities
你為阿迪王火星市場部做了一個(gè)“集齊七雙阿迪王可以召喚神獸”(seven Adivons at hand ,sacred guardian at your command sacred guardian at your command)的策劃,在這個(gè)固定句式添加具體部門啊、具體策劃名稱啊就OK了。
2.加具體數(shù)字(錢、時(shí)間、數(shù)量)
例:Work closely with external agencies to ensure the delivery of the best results
best results是什么呢?就可以展開來講,操作方法如下:
“money”:為你所服務(wù)的機(jī)構(gòu)節(jié)省了開支,提高了收入,或者支配了大額預(yù)算?
Generated over 500$ for the senior prom through fundraisers.
“time”:快證明你會(huì)成為一個(gè)總能在deadline前完成任務(wù)的高效率的員工!
Hired as sales representative and promoted to sales manager within four months
“amount”:數(shù)量可以充分表明你的效率和能力。
Edited copy prior to publication and assisted with layout and production for a college newspaper with a circulation of 5,000.
3.加個(gè)人建議和思考
Learned how to deal with stress,Great improvement on communication skill這些經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的主觀詞語沒必要寫,你有哪些更好的工作改進(jìn)方法、新思路、小創(chuàng)意都可以加進(jìn)來,顯得你會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)有想法。
具體實(shí)踐:“工作經(jīng)歷”怎么說?
business background 工作背景
business experience 工作經(jīng)歷
business history 工作經(jīng)歷
employment experience 工作經(jīng)歷
employment record 雇傭記錄
professional history 職業(yè)經(jīng)歷
professional experience 職業(yè)經(jīng)歷
occupational history 工作經(jīng)歷
如何描述“工作經(jīng)歷”?
工作經(jīng)歷即專職及兼職工作經(jīng)歷(A history of a person’s professional and/or non-professional employment)
包括:工作經(jīng)歷(work experience)、職業(yè)經(jīng)歷(professional history)、具體經(jīng)歷(specific experience)、兼職(Part—time)、實(shí)習(xí)(Intern)、實(shí)際業(yè)績(Performance)、工作成就 (achievements)、個(gè)人能力(People)、市場開發(fā)(Marketing develop)、關(guān)鍵問題的解決(breakthrough)、成功的要素(Element of Success)、勝任力(Competence)、被認(rèn)命的職位(appointed position )等。
例如:
Sales manager.In addition to ordinary sales activities and manament of department , responsible for recruiting and training of sales staff members.
銷售部經(jīng)理。除了政黨銷售活動(dòng)和部門管理之外,還負(fù)責(zé)招聘與訓(xùn)練銷售人員。
Assistant to the General Manager of Shenzhen Petrochemical Industrial Corporation Ltd. Handled the business trip schedule of the general manager.Met clients as a representative of the corporation.Helped to negotiate a $5,000,000 deal for the corporation.
深圳市石油化工集團(tuán)股份有限公司總經(jīng)理助理。安排總經(jīng)理的出差旅行計(jì)劃時(shí)間表。作為公司代表接見客戶。協(xié)助公司談成了筆五百萬美元的交易。
Secretary to president of Silverlion Group Corporation Ltd. Responsibilities:Receiving visitors,scheduling meetings,taking adn typing dictation,writing routine letters and reports.
銀利來集團(tuán)有限公司董事長秘書。職責(zé):接待訪客,安排會(huì)議、筆錄并打字、書寫日常信函及報(bào)告。
Public relations girl at Guangzhou Holiday Inn.Fulltime in summers,part-time during school.
在廣州文化假日酒店當(dāng)*。暑期全職,上課時(shí)間兼職。
Assistant to manager of accounting department of a joint venture enterprise.Analyzed data and relevant financial statistics,and produced monthly financial statements.
一家合資企業(yè)會(huì)計(jì)部門經(jīng)理的助理。分析數(shù)據(jù)及相關(guān)財(cái)務(wù)統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字,而且提出每月的財(cái)務(wù)報(bào)告。
Workde 21 hours weekly as a salesgirl at the bookstore of shenzhen University.Earned 45% of college expenses.
在深圳大學(xué)書店當(dāng)售貨員,每周工作21小時(shí),賺了大學(xué)費(fèi)用的45%.
Production manager:Initiated quality control resulting in a reduction in working hours by 20% while increasing productivity by 25%.
生產(chǎn)部經(jīng)理:引入質(zhì)量控制,使得工作時(shí)數(shù)減少了20%,而生產(chǎn)力則提高了25%.
Staff member of Shanxi Textiles Import adn Export Company.Handled import of textiles from Hong Kong,Macao,Taiwan,Increased sales by 25% from 1990 to 1993.Made frequent business trips to these places to negotiate with textile mills.
山西紡織品進(jìn)出口公司職員。處理從香港、澳門、臺(tái)灣進(jìn)口紡織品事宜。從1990年至1993年增加了25%的銷售額。經(jīng)常出差到這些地方跟紡織廠商洽。
描述“工作經(jīng)歷”時(shí)好用的小詞
advanced worker 先進(jìn)工作者
appointed 被任命的
be promoted to 被提升為
breakthrough 驚人的進(jìn)展,關(guān)鍵問題的解決
behave 表現(xiàn)
control 控制
cost 成本;費(fèi)用
excellent Party member 優(yōu)秀黨員
design 設(shè)計(jì)
develop 開發(fā),發(fā)揮
implement 完成,實(shí)施
import 進(jìn)口
export 出口
found 創(chuàng)立
generate 產(chǎn)生
good at 擅長于
guide 指導(dǎo);操縱
initiate 創(chuàng)始,開創(chuàng)
innovate 改革,革新
reckon 計(jì)算(成本等)
participate in 參加
recommended 被推薦的;被介紹的
second job 第二職業(yè)
utilize 利用