以“A person I will never forget”為題,寫一篇英語短文。
要求:
1.短文內容應包括人物的外貌、性格、愛好和使你難忘之處等;
2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名;
3.詞數(shù)80左右。
A person I will never forget
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A person I will never forget
My uncle Liu is the person that I will never forget, He is a common soldier from the Chinese People's Liberation Army and looks very handsome,especially wearing his PLA uniform. In addition, he is a very generous person and has no hesitation to give his help to anyone who is in troubles. During his free time he likes jogging or playing basketball.
The most unforgettable thing is that one day in winter I had a walk with him on a bridge, when we saw a drowning boy shouting for help in the river, At this moment uncle Liu jumped from the bridge into the river and succeeded in rescuing that boy immediately though it was a very cold day.
In my mind, Uncle Liu is a hero.
權威解讀
這篇文章內容包含所有要點,信息完整,銜接緊密,條理清晰。該文有兩大亮點,一是詞匯量大,如使用了especially,generous,hesitation,unforgettable,drowning,immediately等高級詞匯;二是句式豐富,如使用了when wearing his PLA uniform省略形式,who is in troubles...定語從句,that one day in winter...表語從句等。這些亮點使得該文從眾多文章中脫穎而出,讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。
好詞佳句
1.handsome 英俊的
2.no hesitation 毫不猶豫
3.jump from 從……跳下去
4.succeed in rescuing 成功地營救
5.In addition, he is a very generous person and has no hesitation to give his help to anyone who is in troubles. 再者,他是一個非常大方的人,他會毫不猶豫地給有困難的人提供幫助。
點撥:這是一個較復雜的句型,既有帶to的不定式結構,又有who引導的定語從句,顯示出小作者較高的駕馭英語的能力。
參考樣文
A person I will never forget
The person I'll never forget is my English teacher. He's a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He's humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He's kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know.He often tells us that it's no use memorizing new words without understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.