1.2025年6月大學(xué)英語六級作文高分范文參考 篇一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)現(xiàn)在有越來越多人的選擇節(jié)食，有的人是為了健康，但是更多的人是為了有一個(gè)苗條的身材
2)分析節(jié)食減肥可能帶來的影響
3)你的建議
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象并要求說明原因，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求針對該現(xiàn)象提出“我”的建議，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述越來越多的人節(jié)食的現(xiàn)象并分析主要原因;闡述節(jié)食不當(dāng)可能帶來的影響;針對節(jié)食給出“我”的建議。
On Dieting
Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet.
[3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.
[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect.
[1]“尤其”，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。
[2]“成為主力軍”。
[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[4]用于引出對危害或負(fù)面影響的闡述。
[5]“not only… but also”用于連接并列成分。
[6]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。
[7]“不管因?yàn)槭裁丛颉�，whatever意為“無論什么”。
[8]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。
[9]“像我們期望的那樣”。
1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.
臨摹：基因技術(shù)不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質(zhì)量。
2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.
臨摹： 無論你的目標(biāo)是什么，你都必須通過誠實(shí)的勞動來實(shí)現(xiàn)它。
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3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.
臨�。褐挥行逎M足夠的學(xué)分，學(xué)生才能夠獲準(zhǔn)畢業(yè)。
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【KEY】
1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality
2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.
3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.
2.2025年6月大學(xué)英語六級作文高分范文參考 篇二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)近年來越來越多的大學(xué)生開始使用信用卡
2)分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因
3)針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出你的建議
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求針對該現(xiàn)象給出“我”的建議，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述大學(xué)生使用信用卡的現(xiàn)狀;分析大學(xué)生信用卡用戶增加的原因;針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出“我”的建議。
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
3.2025年6月大學(xué)英語六級作文高分范文參考 篇三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1)近年來越來越多的大學(xué)生開始使用信用卡
2)分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因
3)針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出你的建議 我要高分
Credit Cards on Campus
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求針對該現(xiàn)象給出“我”的建議，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述大學(xué)生使用信用卡的現(xiàn)狀;分析大學(xué)生信用卡用戶增加的原因;針對大學(xué)生使用信用卡提出“我”的建議。
Credit Cards on Campus
In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.
[4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards.
[5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards.
