2007年杭州市中考英語滿分作文范文
假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和來自英國(guó)的一位中學(xué)生Allen一起討論了一個(gè)話題：the ways to learn English better�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的觀點(diǎn)，用英語給你的外籍老師Mr Nunan寫一篇關(guān)于這次討論的匯報(bào)材料。
注意：
1.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好。
2.可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的話語，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫。
3.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格中他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
4.詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。
His ideas
1. reading English newspapers
2. talking with friends in English
3. seeing English films
2007年杭州市中考英語滿分作文范文
Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.
I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Liu Mei
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚，第一段闡述了Allen的觀點(diǎn)，第二段則是敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)。兩段中間用“I quite agree with him.”連接起來，顯得非常自然。同時(shí)作者在闡述自己和別人的觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候使用了不同的表達(dá)方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重復(fù)，增加了語言的多樣化。本文的銜接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等連接詞使文章顯得結(jié)構(gòu)非常地緊湊，讀來一氣呵成。
假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和來自英國(guó)的一位中學(xué)生Allen一起討論了一個(gè)話題：the ways to learn English better�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的觀點(diǎn)，用英語給你的外籍老師Mr Nunan寫一篇關(guān)于這次討論的匯報(bào)材料。
注意：
1.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好。
2.可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的話語，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫。
3.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格中他的觀點(diǎn)和你自己的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
4.詞數(shù)：70個(gè)左右。
His ideas
1. reading English newspapers
2. talking with friends in English
3. seeing English films
2007年杭州市中考英語滿分作文范文
Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.
I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Liu Mei
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚，第一段闡述了Allen的觀點(diǎn)，第二段則是敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)。兩段中間用“I quite agree with him.”連接起來，顯得非常自然。同時(shí)作者在闡述自己和別人的觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候使用了不同的表達(dá)方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重復(fù)，增加了語言的多樣化。本文的銜接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等連接詞使文章顯得結(jié)構(gòu)非常地緊湊，讀來一氣呵成。
